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Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Spaceships

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What is a spaceship?
 
A spaceship is a rocket that goes up in the atmosphere  and Flies around the moon.

Spaceships are shaped like bullets and look like air planes.  they have BIG boosters to help them get up into the sky. When the boosters run out of gas they drop back to earth.

Space ships travel in space and explore planets so that they can find new things like aliens.

Spaceships can be dangerous because they might crash.

I don’t like spaceships because they are scary.

Norm Term 1 2017  
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        


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  2. Hello Norm. I had to write about spaceships 2 years ago and I think your one is way better then mine. At the end you made me laugh by saying your scared of them. I guess there's nothing to worry about because everyone fears different things. Besides that it is great. A you going to post more stuff? If so I will be looking for to it.

    Kind regards
    Jordan

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  3. Hi Norm I really like your work you should work on making your story longer and putting more describing words because their is a lot more info that you didn't put in you story and work on your spelling this is how you spell fly's.

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  4. sup dude i like it bro

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